DDR BRACKET #2 - Set 2 San, MIKI-CHANG, Shouchiro - FU-FA /
GregPresentation 3/5
Banner could do a little work. Don't just lay it out in some neat fashion, do something creative with it. Although the background is very pretty.
Heavy 6/11
A bit too safe, it really needed some breakout to it. Most of the time it was pretty much generic. Tighter placing would do too.
Challenge 7/11
Okay, I actually enjoyed this more. I like the stream patterns, its bits and turns. I didn't really like what you did around bar 31, with the out of nowhere jumps. For such a mellow, happy-go-lucky song, you don't want to actually overexaggerate the steps. Not only cause its challenge either. Yeah, the jumps pretty much pushed it a bit too far. But if this were to be judged from an ITG perspective, that would be .. Normal? (Again I'm no ITG expert); but needless to say, this isn't the ITG bracket either.
Tilt 1/3
I'll give you a point for the attractive, glowy background. Teehee.
Total:
17/30 Noisia remixed by Scratch Perverts - Groundhog (Beat Juggle) - Groundhog /
Jammitch!Presentation 4/5
Polished graphics, plus the one included from Dj Hero. I actually
despise (for lack of a better word) lyrics being put into a simfile because their such a distraction.
Standard 8/11
Alright, it follows the yepadeyapyap as I mentioned earlier. So basically this time, I'll just point out the parts I didn't like. On my perspective, I think you could've done something else with those stream arrows starting in bar 37. A tad too safe for my liking. Bar 71, could be the same pattern as you did with those single 4ths that followed the simple snare drum effect. Or maybe left that bar as nothing cause it's only that beeping noise that's going on. Uhh, kinda repetitive, but it needed to be that way since basically all your charts follow the instruments. Decent.
Heavy 8/11
Since the song is a bit cliche itself, the scratches, the noise, the british (or so I think) dude that talks during those long pauses. Thus, the steps were pretty much obvious and straight-forward; so don't try to think you're in any kind of surprise. In other words anyways, neat placing for such a "boss" song with all those 16ths/12ths/24ths notes.
Tilt 2/3
Point, because Dj Hero is.. THE BOMB. And another for, a decent overall package. Not a full mark; a bit gimmicky for my taste.
Total
22/30EDIT: Jeez, I'm all over the place with this one. My apologies. :S
Akiko Shikata - Katayoku no Tori /
NusaPresentation 4/5
Having the same title font and same size as the author's text tells me on how less of an effort you've done with that banner. Similar to Fu-Fa, the background however, is prettyful. I'll give you a mark for that trippy video, otherwise.
Standard 9/11
Same as I said about heavy. Just more simple, relaxing. I enjoy.
Heavy 8/11
So you've made this a 24th beat sort of chart. (Interesting...) Uhh, based on that, it was pretty hard to have a mark on you for this one, because it just solely reflected on stepping through the vocals. I find it pretty impossible to step such a song as this one. So, I guess I'll just have to give you props for setting up a neatly constructed chart, as well as having balls to tackle a song such as this one.
Tilt 2/3
This simfile had that unique quality, something irrelevant to any other simfile I've played so far.
Total
23/30Quartissimo feat. martina - love SYMPHONY /
Juub_005Presentation 5/5
Masterclass graphics, that cheesy eurofest video.
Standard 7/11
Just nitpicks on some little things that bugged me. That part where you used those two short freeze arrows during that first stop was great. That fitted. The second time you did it, you kinda overdid those two a bit. I think that was it, (LOl) Well the minor part. The major part is, I couldn't feel out of anything from this chart. Maybe its cause of the monotonous beats, the steps, I don't know. As a whole, it just felt.. Dull
Heavy 10/11
Unique set of patterns. I love how those long freezes of arrows later on connect with those streams. Nice pivital 'dance' movements, different movements I'd say. Just great.
Tilt 0/3
Cheese. It's like a 'Venus' commerical song reject. "(
Imagine you and me, we'll fly above the sea)." I didn't like the fact that when I had to re-evalute the steps, I was forced to loop play this song over and over...
Total
22/30Deluhi - Revolver Blast /
tsugaru7revengPresentation 2/5
DDR Universe-esque graphics. (Usually I could care less about them, but since it's a competition, might as well think differently). So, no brownie points there. I'll credit you though for the awesome sauce quality video.
Standard 8/11
I think you were double stepping (not the bad one everyone seems to be flickering about) some parts too much. Other than that, good.
Heavy 9/11
Those repetitive left right left right and so forth streams actually work for this song. It reminds me of those fast DDR indie rock songs, like Volcano, but obviously a miles better chart than Unreal. Everything flowed well up until that slowdown part on bar 42. I think you could clean that up a bit. Maybe add less arrows, or remove those freeze arrows. As a whole anywho, its just the slowdown parts I didn't like; But the rest are pretty effortless.
Tilt 0/3
Stop yelling at me!!!!
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Total
19/20