Entry: She Blinded me with Science / Fadeinn

Presentation - 20 / 20

The presentation was very simple, focusing pretty much on the steps and not on eye candy, which is good-- you wanted the steps to be very functional. The few graphics that you made were highly sufficient in expressing the song itself-- they looked very sizzling, and certainly showed what the song was all about.

Steps (no Oni)

Light Chart - 5 / 5

Nice and well-balanced. I seriously doubt there'd be anything to write about here, as the chart was very well-made, and didn't really have any issues here-- you managed to go with the feel of the song (fairly aggressive, but somewhat controlled-- after all, science has both order and chaos, so you really managed to do something with the steps here), while making the steps nice and accessible to various players-- I can even see the routine players go nuts with this one-- there's actually quite a lot of room for a sweet routine. That said, excellently made-- nice, smooth, well-balanced, and fun.

Standard Chart - 10 / 10

Oh, wow. A technical chart that balances tricky steps and step density in a fun-to-play package. Everything just went in line with the song (not too heavy on steps, but enough to express the energy of the song) and with the rest of the steps (there's a definite theme here, focusing on small run-jump patterns that highlight the themes of the song). There aren't really any issues here-- this is one solid chart. Some players may be thrown off by some of the 8th-note patterns (since they may require either doublestepping or full turns), but its quite a gem of a chart. (looks at routine players)

Heavy Chart - 14 / 15

Slightly over step-dense first 3-4 bars aside, this chart was excellent-- it's quite challenging, given the amount of technique that you placed in the steps here. It's a fairly high-end 8-footer, given the tricky jump patterns that you used-- they certainly show off the energy of the song, and this time, the gloves come off, as you really went berserk with the steps here (woah, all those jumps-- they can be overwhelming, but they worked quite well especially when looking at the rest of the chart). It's quite a surprise, considering the controlled feel of the steps, but I guess you let the more chaotic nature of science take over, as the steps were very intense, but they were very well-placed-- smooth in terms of motion and orientation. I would only suggest that you simplify the first few bars-- I think patterns somewhat similar to Standard in those 4 bars would imply a more dramatic entrance for the sense, which will most likely be very interesting to see. Anyway, great job.